
On March 2nd Myself and fellow student Jen met with Max Hattler to show and discuss our work. It was a very strange experience as it was the first time we did this. We met him on the corner of a street outside a cafe which he had planned we have the portfolio session in, unfortunately it was closed for refurbishment so we went and found another cafe instead.
I decided to show Hattler two pieces of my work which were my concert visual piece for Reverend & The Makers song 'Bandits' Reverend & The Makers - Bandits (Visuals) on Vimeo and my co-produced competition piece 'Harmony Of Chaos'.
On the 'Bandits' piece Hattler said that he liked the finish the piece had to it and that it looked very professional. He asked me if it too a long time to do it as he imagined it would of so I described to him the time in which it took to render a single frame which was about 3-4 mins and there was 2,500 frames I think. He also said that he would like to see more literal imagery in the piece as there is some already, I guess he was saying that because there is some already it is almost teasing the viewer to expect more. Hattler also said that the piece got a bit predictable over time and would of liked to see something that would break it up a bit in the second half of piece. I thought these comments were great because I could understand where he was coming from. in the future I may revisit the piece and implement this feedback and I will certainly take these tips into consideration whilst doing my major project.
On the 'Harmony Of Chaos' piece Hattler again appreciated and liked the 3D and effort that went into the piece but struggled to make sense of the story behind the piece as it was meant to reflect a quote we had found and had worked to which was "Music is harmony, harmony is perfection, perfection is our dream, and our dream is heaven" by Henri Frederic Amiel. We told of a story of a little character breaking free from the chaos and moving with its peers in an harmonious way using the music symbolically as the thing that set the character free. In theory it works but unfortunately the execution didn't. Hattler saw that piece as two halves that was missing the joining point in the middle which was the most vital part. The feedback was excellent as I really needed an outsider especially one that knew experimental film to give me advice on how to improve the work as the piece was abstract.




